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©2004-2009 ~EvilInnocence13
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I decided to give life to the poem A Person / A Paper / A Promise by Earl Reum. I'm typing the poem here as well because it is somewhat hard to read in the picture. Each part is written on it's respective paper...

Once on a yellow piece of paper
he wrote a poem
And he called it "Chops"
because that was the name of his dog
And that's what it was all about
And his teacher gave him an A
and a gold star
And his mother hung it on the kitchen door
and read it to his aunts
That was the year Father Tracy
took all the kids to the zoo
And he let them sing on the bus
And his little sister was born
with tiny toenails and no hair
And his mother and father kissed a lot
And the girl around the corner sent him a
Valentine signed with a row of X's
and he had to ask his father what the X's meant
And his father always tucked him in bed at night
And was always there to do it

Once on a white piece of paper with blue lines
he wrote a poem
And eh called it "Autumn"
because that was the name of the season
And that's what it was all about
And his teacher gave him an A
and told him to write more clearly
And his mother never hung it on the kitchen door
because of it's new paint
And the kids told him
that Father Tracy smoked cigars
And left butts on the pews
And sometimes they would burn holes
And that was the year that his sister got glasses
with thick lenses and black frames
And the girl around the corner laughed
when he asked her to go see Santa Claus
And the kids told him why
his parents kissed a lot
And his father never tucked him in bed at night
And his father got mad
when he cried for him to do it

Once on a paper torn from his notebook
he wrote a poem
And he called it"Innocence: A Question"
because that was the question about his girl
And that's what it was all about
And his professor gave him an A
and a strange steady look
And his mother never hung it on the kitchen door
because he never showed her
That was the year that Father Tracy died
And he forgot how the end
of the Apostle's Creed went
And he caught his sister
making out on the back porch
And his mother and father never kissed
or even talked
And the girl around the corner
wore too much makeup
That made him cough when he kissed her
but he kissed her anyway
because that was the thing to do
And at three A.M. he tucked himself into bed
his father snoring soundly

That's why on the back of a brown paper bag
he tried another poem
And he called it "Absolutely Nothing"
Because that's what it was really all about
And he gave himself an A
and a slash on each damned wrist
And he hung it on the bathroom door
because this time he didn't think
he could reach the kitchen.

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:iconknavewav:
awesome... fav.

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my sad, sorry, selffish, cry out to the cutter, im cutting trying to picture your black broken heart

love is not like anything.
especially a fucking knife.
:iconevilinnocence13:
Thanx :)

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*~*Enchantress and Forbearer of Darkness*~*
:iconknavewav:
n/p.

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my sad, sorry, selffish, cry out to the cutter, im cutting trying to picture your black broken heart

love is not like anything.
especially a fucking knife.
:iconcrowslikeshinythings:
wow.......this is very. i dont even know, but i like it..

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I've disappeared. I've come so close from so far. I hide behind this window and look at myself, look at a life I'd rather not see.
:iconevilinnocence13:
Thanx much :)

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*~*Enchantress and Forbearer of Darkness*~*
:iconataryu:
This is really awesome very creative....Makes me want to slit my wrists, but thats just me.....I like it alot, +fav
:iconboxofsharpobjects:
Amazing. I love it. I must :+fav: it

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Keeping Me From Killing You


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:iconevilinnocence13:
Thanx :)

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*~*Enchantress and Forbearer of Darkness*~*
:iconboxofsharpobjects:
no problem

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Keeping Me From Killing You


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